From 82f814b966421cfd82e746e6853d46a63d069dc8 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: tyrionmcmaster <31110358+tyrionmcmaster@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Thu, 7 Sep 2017 18:36:38 -0400
Subject: [PATCH] Update index.md

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-                        <p>One may purchase Monero on an <a href="/community/merchants/">exchange</a> with fiat or other cryptocurrencies. An alternate way of acquiring Monero is via <a href="https://getmonero.org/get-started/mining/">mining</a>, the process whereby transactions are immutably recorded on the blockchain.</p>
+                        <p>Monero may be purchased on an <a href="/community/merchants/">exchange</a> with fiat or other cryptocurrencies. An alternate way of acquiring Monero is via <a href="https://getmonero.org/get-started/mining/">mining</a>, the computationally-complex process whereby transactions are immutably recorded on the blockchain.</p>
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