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                             <h1 id="main-h1">Monero</h1>
                             <h2 id="main-h2">Private Digital Currency</h2>
-                            <p id="main-text">Monero is a secure, private, untraceable currency. It is open-source and freely available to all. With Monero, you are your own bank. Only 
-                            you control and are responsible for your funds; your accounts 
+                            <p id="main-text">Monero is a secure, private and untraceable cryptocurrency. It is open-source and accessible to all. With Monero, you are your own bank. Only 
+                            you control and are responsible for your funds. Your accounts 
                             and transactions are kept private from prying eyes.</p>
                             <p><a href="/get-started/using/" class="btn-link btn-auto btn-primary">Get Started</a></p>
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                             <h3>Monero is secure.</h3>
-                            <p>Monero can't be hacked to steal your funds, due to the power of distributed consensus, which you can read about here. This means that you are responsible for your money, and don't have to trust any entity to keep it safe for you.</p>
+                            <p>Monero cannot be hacked to steal your funds, due to its decentralized nature. Only you are responsible for securing your Monero.</p>
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                             <img src="/img/secure-monero.png" alt="Secure safe" class="main-icon">
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                             <h3>Monero is private.</h3>
-                            <p>The power of the blockchain usually increases security at the cost of privacy, but with Monero's sophisticated privacy-centric technology, you get all of the security benefits of the blockchain without any of the privacy trade-offs.</p>
+                            <p>Security of the blockchain normally increases at the cost of privacy. Monero is based on the Cryptonote application layer protocol, which allows for the security benefits of blockchain technology without any of the privacy trade-offs</p>
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                             <h3>Monero is untraceable.</h3>
-                            <p>By taking advantage of ring signatures, Monero makes it ambiguous which funds have been spent, and thus extremely unlikely that a transaction could be linked to particular user.</p>
+                            <p>Sending and receiving addresses as well as transacted amounts are obfuscated. Transactions cannot be linked to a particular user or real-world identity.</p>
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                             <img src="/img/untraceable-monero.png" alt="Untraceable Monero paths" class="main-icon">
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                             <h3>Monero is fungible.</h3>
-                            <p>Because of the on-by-default nature of the privacy technologies, Monero is fungible, meaning one Monero will always be equal to another. This means you won't have to worry about Monero blacklisted by exchanges or vendors.</p>
+                            <p>Privacy is always-on. Therefore Monero is fungible, meaning  Monero will never be blacklisted by exchanges or vendors due to its association in previous transactions.</p>
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