From ef148f22b812fd8d5f47e98a202205a36c7060e1 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: tyrionmcmaster <31110358+tyrionmcmaster@users.noreply.github.com> Date: Tue, 21 Nov 2017 13:13:57 -0500 Subject: [PATCH] Slight modifications to wording on home page --- index.html | 12 ++++++------ 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-) diff --git a/index.html b/index.html index 4ee8af9d..25b36404 100644 --- a/index.html +++ b/index.html @@ -37,7 +37,7 @@ Title: Home </div> <div class="row middle-xs info-block-row private"> <div class="col-lg-6 col-md-6 col-sm-8 col-xs-12 why-text"> - <h3>Monero is secure.</h3> + <h3>Monero is secure</h3> <p>Monero is a decentralized cryptocurrency, meaning it is secure digital cash operated by a network of users. Transactions are confirmed by distributed consensus, and then immutably recorded on the blockchain. Third-parties do not need to be trusted to keep your Monero safe. </p> </div> <div class="col-lg-6 col-md-6 col-sm-4 col-xs-12 last-sm first-xs center-xs"> @@ -49,14 +49,14 @@ Title: Home <img src="/img/private-monero.png" alt="No surveillance" class="main-icon"> </div> <div class="col-lg-6 col-md-6 col-sm-8 col-xs-12 why-text"> - <h3>Monero is private.</h3> - <p>Monero uses ring signatures and ring confidential transactions to obfuscate the amounts, origins, and destinations of all transactions. Monero provides all the benefits of a decentralized cryptocurrency, without any of the typical privacy concessions. </p> + <h3>Monero is private</h3> + <p>Monero uses ring signatures, ring confidential transactions, and stealth addresses to obfuscate the origins, amounts and destinations of all transactions. Monero provides all the benefits of a decentralized cryptocurrency, without any of the typical privacy concessions. </p> </div> </div> <div class="row middle-xs info-block-row"> <div class="col-lg-6 col-md-6 col-sm-8 col-xs-12 why-text"> - <h3>Monero is untraceable.</h3> + <h3>Monero is untraceable</h3> <p>Sending and receiving addresses as well as transacted amounts are obfuscated by default. Transactions on the Monero blockchain cannot be linked to a particular user or real-world identity.</p> </div> <div class="col-lg-6 col-md-6 col-sm-4 col-xs-12 last-sm first-xs center-xs"> @@ -68,8 +68,8 @@ Title: Home <img src="/img/fungible-monero.png" alt="Monero gold" class="main-icon"> </div> <div class="col-lg-6 col-md-6 col-sm-8 col-xs-12 why-text"> - <h3>Monero is fungible.</h3> - <p> Monero is fungible because it is private by default. In its current state, it is extremely unlikely that Monero will ever be blacklisted by exchanges or vendors due to its association in previous transactions.</p> + <h3>Monero is fungible</h3> + <p> Monero is fungible <a href="https://getmonero.org/resources/moneropedia/fungibility.html">because it is private by default. Units of Monero cannot be blacklisted by vendors or exchanges due to their association in previous transactions.</p> </div> </div> </div>